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Melancholy Moon

In search of a past self.

19 total reviews 
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well written and very powerful. Love the picture. It goes so well with your words. Sometimes I wish I could float on top of a moonbeam. Life is so hard, sometimes. Very well written. Great job

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I wish you moonbeams, shooting stars with wishes to come true, and rainbows when life is hard for you.
    Blessings,
    Glenda
Comment from Baltimore Born
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First of all, that is an excellent picture. Your picture compliments the poem well. The poem is well-crafted and reads well. Great creativity throughout the poem. Also liked the rhyming throughout this poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much for your review. Appreciate you.
    God bless,
    Glenda
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Beauty in melancholy. I really enjoyed your poem and could feel the pain that it derived from. I would wish for her the happiness of a star-filled sky and the inner peace to enjoy it fully. Thanks for sharing this. Nice work.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
    Awe, what a beautiful review. Thank you so much for your time and kind words.
    Blessings,
    Glenda
Comment from royowen
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You must have a beautiful heart, to be so concerned for others, in this day and age, it would be a rarity. You've also displayed a unique talent with this fine poem, I enjoyed. Reading it, well dine, good job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much Roy. I am glad you enjoyed it. Hope you are well. Appreciate your kind review.
    God bless,
    Glenda
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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You've written a beautiful poem. I love the metaphor of floating atop a moonbeam. This for me can be read on several levels including self healing. Great job.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much. Self healing is a lovely way to red this. Poetry and writing for me is therapeutic, and this one especially has been for me. Thanks again for the review.
    Blessings,
    Glenda
Comment from Boogienights
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A very well written and imaginitive poem. The imagery really painted a picture of the lovely moon and dark skies. That was quite a trip. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a lyrical poem. I liked reading it. The moon's personification is intriguing, because of the idea of the mirror. It seems there may even be yet another meaning or metaphor here with 'the dark side of the moon' mentioned, but I took the more literal reading. Nice share.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked it. You are correct there is a deeper meaning :), but I am glad it can be enjoyed for both. Thanks again.
    Blessings,
    Glenda
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
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I love the images that come in my head with this poem, and the rhyming is great! I also think the picture you chose to go with this poem is perfect! Thanks for posting this!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Austin Moore
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This poem is beautifully written, and the words flow together perfectly. As someone who loves the night sky, I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and review. Have a great weekend.
    Blessings,
    Glenda
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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The truth is in the mirror image staring back at you. The moonbeam doesn't play games it only shoots out into space but you are writing about your inner soul and its need to find a place to live and conquer all who fight to defend the other the other is the one who discovers you in the first place.
Jesse

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    I like your thoughtful interpretation and your description was so colorful with a dash of strenth. Thank you for the review. Appreciate you.
    Blessings,
    Glenda
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    strength :)