Contradiction of Terms
Do not be a cold fish.2 total reviews
Comment from JP_Ryan
this is a lovely little poem, I love it, so simple, yet so thought provoking, nothing as debilitating as a loveless life, thank you for sharing, have a lovely day.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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this is a lovely little poem, I love it, so simple, yet so thought provoking, nothing as debilitating as a loveless life, thank you for sharing, have a lovely day.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you. If we do not give and receive love, is there not something important missing?
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh deep and thought-provoking little poem about feelings
good monorhyme
But loveless life <-- this part tripped me up a bit. maybe "but A loveless life..."?
just a thought - or it could be just me lol
nice work!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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ooh deep and thought-provoking little poem about feelings
good monorhyme
But loveless life <-- this part tripped me up a bit. maybe "but A loveless life..."?
just a thought - or it could be just me lol
nice work!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
Thank you. If no love is given or received, to what extent does a human being have life?