Plantain vs. Banana: Fight!
only one will triumph2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I absolutely agree with your poem's message! I might not have used the word "turds," but it works. You got the syllable count right, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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I absolutely agree with your poem's message! I might not have used the word "turds," but it works. You got the syllable count right, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thanks! I was going for a negative visceral reaction, however based on your comments I have updated the piece. (Why the site allows us to do this between entering and voting, I don't know, but since it does, I did). Love to hear what you think of the second version.
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I liked the first version fine, but I like the new version too. I?m not a real poet, so you shouldn?t listen to me
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I'm not a real poet either (more like a terrorist on this site) so I take advice from non-poets : )
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was a fun poem. I don't think I've ever tried a plantain. Won't now! Very creative and you say so much with just three lines. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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This was a fun poem. I don't think I've ever tried a plantain. Won't now! Very creative and you say so much with just three lines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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They are good if you cook them, just not raw! Thanks very much.