A Perfect Moment
Me and He time.3 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
Hey, letting you know that this piece does not meet the syllable count requirements for this contest. This is a 3-5-3 and the contest requires a 5-7-5. The CEC will disqualify it, but if you change it right now, it will likely make it through. This low rating is intended to get your attention so you have an opportunity to do this in time. Message me back after fixing it and I will adjust the rating.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Hey, letting you know that this piece does not meet the syllable count requirements for this contest. This is a 3-5-3 and the contest requires a 5-7-5. The CEC will disqualify it, but if you change it right now, it will likely make it through. This low rating is intended to get your attention so you have an opportunity to do this in time. Message me back after fixing it and I will adjust the rating.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the warning. I have completed "Take Two".
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Cool, I updated the rating
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
The contest called for a syllable count of 5-7-5, and this poem had 3-5-3. I did like the poem, though. It was sweet. Good luck with this poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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The contest called for a syllable count of 5-7-5, and this poem had 3-5-3. I did like the poem, though. It was sweet. Good luck with this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Yes I have been warned by Harambe Take two completed with permission.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. This read to me like a new love formed. You say a lot with just a few words. I love how you ended it with "puppy love". Very creative and enjoyable.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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I thought this was great. This read to me like a new love formed. You say a lot with just a few words. I love how you ended it with "puppy love". Very creative and enjoyable.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Michael. It was my first attempt at that style though I love Haiku