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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have a feeling the child will enjoy the interaction with his dad just as much as the zoo. There is nothing more important than spending time with one's child. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and presentation with us.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. May you have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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oh i loved making shadow puppets on my bedroom walls!!
kept a flashlight by my bed just for that reason LOL!

totally fun gogyohka poem
good imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from s.m.kirby
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That poor child will Have memories of her dad doing animal shadows on the wall, and it will make her smile at the memory some day. I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by s.m.kirby on 22-Feb-2024
    your welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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At least, that child who lives in poverty has a father who cares enough to give an animal entertainment through hand shadows. Some rich kids don't have that level of attention. Nice one!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love
    Marival