Rivers Run Deep
Catching Sadness3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Hopefully, our tears are few and far and that we have more happy days than sad ones.
I like the metaphor (?) used. I usually like to see a pic but your words were so powerful that it would have been superfluous.
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Hopefully, our tears are few and far and that we have more happy days than sad ones.
I like the metaphor (?) used. I usually like to see a pic but your words were so powerful that it would have been superfluous.
Best of luck!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words!
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You are welcome !🍀
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the rivers.
-You do a good job describing your emotions,
relating your feelings to the river.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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-Nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the rivers.
-You do a good job describing your emotions,
relating your feelings to the river.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your thorough, kind review!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Baltimore Born
That is a lot of sadness. This is a well-written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count for this contest is on point. Each line connected well with the next. Good poem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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That is a lot of sadness. This is a well-written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count for this contest is on point. Each line connected well with the next. Good poem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much!