Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. Your poem reads and flows well. The syllable count in each line meets the requirement for this contest. Good personification in your second line. Nice complimentary picture. Good job.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024

Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the challenge! It's familiar, positive, and full of good imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank your for sharing it.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024

Thanks for your read and feedback.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Great expression of emotion for your Senryu! I love the use of your word "hum". Beautifully told and perfect accompanying picture. Best of luck in the contest! Julie.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024

Thanks for your read and feedback. Always a pleasure to get a review from you.