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Vegetables

liking vegetables

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written Children's rhyming poem you have penned about vegetables. You used very good descriptive and rhyming words. I love the last line - I like rabbits. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you for you review and kind words. I do appreciate it.
Comment from jessizero
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I think your "lik" in the first line needs to be "like." It seems to be just a typo. Other than that, this was a cute children's poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review and pointing out my mistake. I do appreciate it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think you need an adjustment for this line:

I don't lik my vgetables,

did you mean (I don't (lick) my (vegetables) or (I don't (like) my (vegetables)?

Rabbits would certainly make a meal of this lot. Congrats on your 50th post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
    I messed up it was to be like, I went back and fixed it. Thank you.