The Hobos, The Vagrants, And Me
A new and happy life5 total reviews
Comment from justafan
I'm a little late to the party but I have to say I enjoyed this write. I also enjoyed the music ð??¼ you chose.
I hope you don't mind if I add you to friends :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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I'm a little late to the party but I have to say I enjoyed this write. I also enjoyed the music ð??¼ you chose.
I hope you don't mind if I add you to friends :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from cupa tea
The hobos, the vagrants, and me!
I love that! Count me in as a hobo...lol...
Nicely written fast moving poem. I think it could almost be a song. Today we have people who live in cars because they want to live in cars. They'd fit right in with your poem...
Good luck in the contest!
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The hobos, the vagrants, and me!
I love that! Count me in as a hobo...lol...
Nicely written fast moving poem. I think it could almost be a song. Today we have people who live in cars because they want to live in cars. They'd fit right in with your poem...
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well this is jolly, fun and original! It made me feel happy reading it which I'm sure is the purpose of the brief:)) The last 2 lines seal the deal! Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Well this is jolly, fun and original! It made me feel happy reading it which I'm sure is the purpose of the brief:)) The last 2 lines seal the deal! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a fun and imaginative poem. It almost sings to you. Very creative and I like the use of repetition. It captures the feeling of being free and just going wherever the train may be going.
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This is such a fun and imaginative poem. It almost sings to you. Very creative and I like the use of repetition. It captures the feeling of being free and just going wherever the train may be going.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent rhyming poem for the challenge! It is full of descriptive words and colorful imagery. Your photo presentation supports your words well. Many readers will enjoy reviewing this as I did. Well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent rhyming poem for the challenge! It is full of descriptive words and colorful imagery. Your photo presentation supports your words well. Many readers will enjoy reviewing this as I did. Well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much! It's a pleasure always to her from you!