Happy Daydreams
What happy daydreams are made of4 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Again, the font is perfect for the theme of this contest! This looks and reads like a list one might jot down...of their favorite "happy" places and activities!
Your sprinkling of alliteration is very nice!
(cotton candy clouds / capture / creating / cabin / carmel (which I think is spelled caramel btw)--
"S" alliteration as well!
Please check your author's note for one correction needed:
"This is not a literal daydream, but just expresses all the happy ferlings we can have during one." (feelings)
Not to worry, we all miss a typo now and then!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Again, the font is perfect for the theme of this contest! This looks and reads like a list one might jot down...of their favorite "happy" places and activities!
Your sprinkling of alliteration is very nice!
(cotton candy clouds / capture / creating / cabin / carmel (which I think is spelled caramel btw)--
"S" alliteration as well!
Please check your author's note for one correction needed:
"This is not a literal daydream, but just expresses all the happy ferlings we can have during one." (feelings)
Not to worry, we all miss a typo now and then!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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I purposely threw all these words together to try to show a bunch of happy things that go through our mind in a daydream. Thanks for reading it!
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This one made me smile...
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet! You now have 7 votes.
Your poem was delightful , like enjoying candy or pink fairy floss.
I love walking barefoot in grass , sand .. on clouds would be paradise.
Love the raspberry rain and the stars like gems capture in silk sheets.
When I read stone fireplace you had earned my vote!
Yes I have one and I love watching it burn at night in the dark.
I love your vivid imagination !
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Ciao poet! You now have 7 votes.
Your poem was delightful , like enjoying candy or pink fairy floss.
I love walking barefoot in grass , sand .. on clouds would be paradise.
Love the raspberry rain and the stars like gems capture in silk sheets.
When I read stone fireplace you had earned my vote!
Yes I have one and I love watching it burn at night in the dark.
I love your vivid imagination !
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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You made my day! Thanks for the great review!
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🙂
Hope you have a great weekend !🍀
Comment from Julie Helms
Your poem is an image bonanza of the senses. Lots of tactile sensation, visual imagery, even a little taste at the end!
Very nicely done. It looks like it was fun to write.
Best to you,
Julie
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Your poem is an image bonanza of the senses. Lots of tactile sensation, visual imagery, even a little taste at the end!
Very nicely done. It looks like it was fun to write.
Best to you,
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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It was so fun to write thanks for the great review!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge! It is full of descriptive words and colorful imagery. Your photo presentation supports your words well. Many readers will enjoy reviewing this as I did. Well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge! It is full of descriptive words and colorful imagery. Your photo presentation supports your words well. Many readers will enjoy reviewing this as I did. Well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much! It was fun to write!