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Fine Tune Our lives

Attitude Check

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This was an enjoyable poem. The flow was excellent as the word choices for the rhyme seemed so natural. The descriptions were excellent. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank You
Comment from jim vecchio
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It doesn't seem like the world will ever learn that lesson! From Eden onward, there have always been divisions. Maybe your words will strike the right people who can make a difference.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you
reply by jim vecchio on 21-Feb-2024
    Enjoy your writing!