Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very well written Rhyming Alliteration poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words about the One I love the most! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Thank you, Teri. :) I happy you liked it. Thank you... I'm seeing stars! :) Shared third place.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent faith based poem with a strong steady beat. Love the third verse where you question the reader. Your words make the reader think. Your rhyming of words is smooth and I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Thank you, Mermaids. :) God is good. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Your poem reminds me of Lent and fasting for God's gracious grace. Like your poem. I'm sure you'll do well with this poem; it is this time of the year when we must count our blessings each day.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Everyday is a good day when we see the sun, Rosemary, even if it's hiding. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-written poem. The poem reads and flows well. Your rhyming is in good order for this contest. Your syllable count is on point. Good picture which compliments the poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Thank you, Baltimore. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It's interesting and impressive. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Nice. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024

Thank you, Raul. :) I'm happy you liked it.