2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your caterpillar sounds like a lovely lady awaiting her day at the prom. Your poem is filled with good imagery. Of note:
while chewing tough leaves
(It's those "tough leaves" in life that make us better and stronger.)
Well done. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your caterpillar sounds like a lovely lady awaiting her day at the prom. Your poem is filled with good imagery. Of note:
while chewing tough leaves
(It's those "tough leaves" in life that make us better and stronger.)
Well done. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm trying to think of the word for when someone gives an animal or in this case the butterfly human thoughts. I can't come up with the word. I hate when my brain does this or just getting older. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this poem. This is a beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I'm trying to think of the word for when someone gives an animal or in this case the butterfly human thoughts. I can't come up with the word. I hate when my brain does this or just getting older. Anyway, I enjoyed reading this poem. This is a beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Personification?
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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YES!! Thank you.
Comment from shelley kaye
i love butterflies! this was a great haiku... though maybe the pics should be switch? caterpillar first, butterfly second? eh or it could be just me lol
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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i love butterflies! this was a great haiku... though maybe the pics should be switch? caterpillar first, butterfly second? eh or it could be just me lol
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
It does make you wonder if they know about the upcoming transformation into such a beautiful creature. Beautifully written with a subtle message. Toughing things out sometimes offers a beautiful outcome. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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It does make you wonder if they know about the upcoming transformation into such a beautiful creature. Beautifully written with a subtle message. Toughing things out sometimes offers a beautiful outcome. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Let's keep chewing those "touch leaves" that life gives us because someday we will become beautiful butterflies! Lovely picture and lovely illustration of our earthly and future heavenly realities!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Let's keep chewing those "touch leaves" that life gives us because someday we will become beautiful butterflies! Lovely picture and lovely illustration of our earthly and future heavenly realities!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, big sister. May you have a wonderful night.
Love
Marival
Comment from Julie Helms
As usual, a beautiful haiku, beautiful presentation, and beautiful photos. The theme reminds me a bit about having to kiss a lot of frogs to get your Prince charming. And how original to even think about a caterpillar dreaming! Really enjoyable. Julie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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As usual, a beautiful haiku, beautiful presentation, and beautiful photos. The theme reminds me a bit about having to kiss a lot of frogs to get your Prince charming. And how original to even think about a caterpillar dreaming! Really enjoyable. Julie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs