Comment from
Julie Helms
A lovely 575 that is both nostalgic of younger, easier days, and forward looking to warmer ones!
Your imagery works well and your accompanying picture is perfect. Thanks so much for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
Comment from
LateBloomer
Hi Jude, your poem is filled with vivid imagery and good sensory appeal.
Of special note:
the brook lulls me back to sleep
(I can see it; I can hear it.)
Well done. Great photo choice. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024