2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from GWHARGIS
That must be one of the scariest notices to find on your front door. Just knowing, unless you can get a haul or have good friends to help, your things are going to be tossed out in the street. Poor mice probably know their free ride is up. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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That must be one of the scariest notices to find on your front door. Just knowing, unless you can get a haul or have good friends to help, your things are going to be tossed out in the street. Poor mice probably know their free ride is up. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOl I couldn't help but to laugh at this contest entry. Yes, even that cute little mouse is worried. I am not a fan of mice, but that little guy or gal is adorable. LOl I really enjoyed reading this poem and the entire presentation.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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LOl I couldn't help but to laugh at this contest entry. Yes, even that cute little mouse is worried. I am not a fan of mice, but that little guy or gal is adorable. LOl I really enjoyed reading this poem and the entire presentation.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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LoL Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
lol. this was interesting - who's getting evicted? why are the mouses unsettled? where are the humans? the simple 7 words lead to 700 questions of wonder. . .
i like poems that keep me wondering... nice work!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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lol. this was interesting - who's getting evicted? why are the mouses unsettled? where are the humans? the simple 7 words lead to 700 questions of wonder. . .
i like poems that keep me wondering... nice work!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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The tenant and mice are getting evicted.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That mouse is so cute. That haiku is well written. You do know your stuff. You have set a good example. More people are explaining the kind of poetry they are writing. I wrote a nonet the other day. :-)n Karen
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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That mouse is so cute. That haiku is well written. You do know your stuff. You have set a good example. More people are explaining the kind of poetry they are writing. I wrote a nonet the other day. :-)n Karen
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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You Are Welcome Karen :-)
Comment from lyenochka
That mouse is so cute! I like your use of alliteration and consonance and how both the first lines end with -ice. Yes, even the mice would be nervous about what will happen next to the house.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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That mouse is so cute! I like your use of alliteration and consonance and how both the first lines end with -ice. Yes, even the mice would be nervous about what will happen next to the house.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very cute writing that you have done with this one and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This is a very cute writing that you have done with this one and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs