Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 19"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
16 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm running so far behind on reviews that I doubt I'll get everything read before midnight tomorrow, but that doesn't mean that I appreciate your post any less. It's always a pleasure, my dear. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
  |
I'm running so far behind on reviews that I doubt I'll get everything read before midnight tomorrow, but that doesn't mean that I appreciate your post any less. It's always a pleasure, my dear. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
-
You're a sweetheart. I am honored that you found time to read this chapter (you aren't too far behind) and blessed that I earned one of those precious stars. I never doubt that your messages are anything less than special.
Smiles and happy reading...LOL
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
I hope Audrey isn't thinking of pressing charges against Dion now. I'm glad Jackson overheard her talking about the insurance. He can probably advise her about what needs to be done. Another interesting chapter. Carol
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
 |
I hope Audrey isn't thinking of pressing charges against Dion now. I'm glad Jackson overheard her talking about the insurance. He can probably advise her about what needs to be done. Another interesting chapter. Carol
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
-
The difficult times facing her with her job, the house, and Bobby's death overwhelmed Audrey...not to mention Gabby's situation. I think when she calms down she will think things through better. I hope so for Jackson's sake.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
|
This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
-
Thank you for reading and reviewing. As always, I appreciate it very much,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I will be really angry if they stitch Dion up, he's the only real innocent one in this awful ordeal. Anyway, they can tell that there are no drugs in Doins body, so they can't accuse him. They just need Bobby's passenger to remember what happened That Jason has to own up to him being the father. A DNA test will be able to prove it. Okay, off I go again. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
|
I will be really angry if they stitch Dion up, he's the only real innocent one in this awful ordeal. Anyway, they can tell that there are no drugs in Doins body, so they can't accuse him. They just need Bobby's passenger to remember what happened That Jason has to own up to him being the father. A DNA test will be able to prove it. Okay, off I go again. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
-
Yes, the lab tests will prove he hasn't done drugs...they could say he was dealing, but I don't think that will happen. Judy can clear him as soon as she remembers. Jason is a rich kid that thinks most things can be swept under the rug... but this time it's a baby.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Oh Carol. You just won't let me relax and think something is going to work out right. You keep tightening the screws and thickening the plot. What a weasel Jason is. And Audrey, desperate for money, will do whatever it takes to get money to save herself. Every chapter is a brilliant study in human nature.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
Oh Carol. You just won't let me relax and think something is going to work out right. You keep tightening the screws and thickening the plot. What a weasel Jason is. And Audrey, desperate for money, will do whatever it takes to get money to save herself. Every chapter is a brilliant study in human nature.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
Maybe when given the choice of Jackson or money, her stress and anxiety will help her make the correct choice. We can hope! As for Jason, he's a lost cause... tunnel vision and parents who have taught him only one goal counts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Webs are being weaved and threads are being untangled. I see working at cross purposes here!
The ending of this chapter had the real feel of a soap opera to it. Your story does a great job with character development. There is depth to it, not just superficial.
intoxication might be mute if it were proven (moot)
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
Webs are being weaved and threads are being untangled. I see working at cross purposes here!
The ending of this chapter had the real feel of a soap opera to it. Your story does a great job with character development. There is depth to it, not just superficial.
intoxication might be mute if it were proven (moot)
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
You, my dear, are on your toes this morning and I thank you. Error is fixed and I appreciate the review and comments.
Smiles as always, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
To be honest, Audrey sounds as though she is just about as scheming as her brother, and she's not going to let truth stand in her way when she needs money. She doesn't deserve Jackson. I am glad that Dion has the coach willing to stand up for his character.
Wendy
Edit: close quotes after "All our troubles will be over. (")
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
To be honest, Audrey sounds as though she is just about as scheming as her brother, and she's not going to let truth stand in her way when she needs money. She doesn't deserve Jackson. I am glad that Dion has the coach willing to stand up for his character.
Wendy
Edit: close quotes after "All our troubles will be over. (")
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
They came from a rough background and Audrey has tried to better herself, but she's overwhelmed and she tends to fall back on bad habits. Hopefully, she will come to her senses before she loses Jackson.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Audrey is desperate, but she will be making a huge mistake in trying to prove Dion caused the wreck so she can sue for money. The coach will certainly defend Dion, but Jason is too much of a coward to tell the truth about the baby.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
Audrey is desperate, but she will be making a huge mistake in trying to prove Dion caused the wreck so she can sue for money. The coach will certainly defend Dion, but Jason is too much of a coward to tell the truth about the baby.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
Jason was groomed to be a football star...the center of attention. Only after it's too late will he learn what the best things in life really are. And Audrey, a product of a poor upbringing, will hopefully overcome her fears and be the person she has struggled to be before she loses Jackson.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
I see where you're going with this. I know desperation causes people to do some pretty shady things.
Very smart having Audrey call a friend who had more than "general" knowledge and additionally can hook her up with an attorney if liability means a big payday...
It makes sense she'd be very worried about "what happens now."
Poor Dion. Audrey is really going to want drug charges to stick!
Poor Audrey...What did Jackson hear?
What a good chapter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
|
I see where you're going with this. I know desperation causes people to do some pretty shady things.
Very smart having Audrey call a friend who had more than "general" knowledge and additionally can hook her up with an attorney if liability means a big payday...
It makes sense she'd be very worried about "what happens now."
Poor Dion. Audrey is really going to want drug charges to stick!
Poor Audrey...What did Jackson hear?
What a good chapter!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
-
Thank you for jumping in there and rattling my cage. I didn't feel right when I wrote it, but I couldn't put my finger on what was wrong. Of course, you did! Kudos to you!
I rewrote the ending with Audrey talking to a girlfriend (paralegal - retired). Also, I googled the intoxication part and it did say if it was proven the driver on drugs was responsible for the crash, he would be responsible for vehicular manslaughter. Depending on the lawyers and the insurance companies, the other driver (regardless of his intoxication) could be exempt from the accident, though he would still be ticketed for driving while under the influence.
Here's hoping that this makes more sense. Thanks again..
Let me know your thoughts.... Smiles, Carol..
-
I'll go read it... You know I love you and would never lead you astray! (I'll spruce up my review comments too)
K
Comment from prettybluebirds
It's getting better with each chapter. I have faith that you will save Dion in the end. I'm so glad you are such a fast writer so I don't have to wait days for the next chapter. Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
|
It's getting better with each chapter. I have faith that you will save Dion in the end. I'm so glad you are such a fast writer so I don't have to wait days for the next chapter. Excellent writing.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
-
Smiles to you, April. I sure as heck hope I save the young man. There's too few of his kind around these days.
Smiles, Carol