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Comment from NanaGaye
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A lovely poem for mermaid Elaine who sounds like a wonderful talented woman,As usual your rhyming is perfect. I'm a bit behind with my reviewing about to catch up. Love and best wishes

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
    LOL, I just come back from finding you, and here you've been busy leaving fairy dust on my poems. You never fail to amaze me, and I thank you with all my heart. ♥️.. thanks for all the kind words, my sweet and wonderful friend.
    And for the six stars sprinkled with fairy dust. You are such a special kid at heart.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I'm not sure if I know Mermaids poems, but I love fairies and unicorms so I shall have to look her up. This is another informative and lovely birthday poem Debi,
I'm sure her mermiad tale is wagging happily.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Oh Valda,, you are so dang sweet. Thank you so very much for the kind words for Elaine and her poem. I sure hope she is enjoying all these great birthday wishes too. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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When i was little, i wanted to be an Anthropologist

I didn't know anything about Elaine, so this poem helps to get to know her better.

Well done!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Thank you Gypsy, for this kind review. I think Elaine would like to hear from you too. I love that you also wanted to be an Anthropologist.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Julie Helms
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Ha ha, at the end of your first stanza I was like "a mermaid with guinea pigs?" I will slowly catch up to who the members are here and recognize them a little sooner in the poetry! Thank you for this lovely tribute and education. Julie.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    You are so cute, Julie. I guess that line would sound kinda funny if you think of a real mermaid with a guinea pig.
    Thanks for the fun review, and the kind comments my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-I know Elaine will appreciate your poem, too.
-She adds a lot to FanStory with her fantasy poems.
-You make a good reporter and find out interesting information.
-I think Cape Cod does make a "perfect mermaid scene."
-I am sorry to hear she lost her husband so early in their marriage.

Have a very Happy Birthday, Elaine. I enjoyed learning a little
about you. You are definitely a well rounded person with your college
degree, working with Alzheimer's patients, and living on Cape Cod
has to give you a wonderful place for your imagination to thrive and to enjoy each day.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Pam, as always, thank you for the awesome review and great comments.
    You are such a great reviewer and I know I tell you that every time but it is so true. Thanks for all your wonderful comments, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Feb-2024
    You are very welcome, Debi.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Happy Birthday, Mermaids!

This is a great piece, Debi. There is so much I
ve learned about people and what goes on in their lives.

I had to laugh at the last stanza here as I'm just getting ready to file for Medicare. Haha! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hey John, thanks for the kind words for this poem. You are such a sweet guy and I appreciate your always lovely reviews.
    Love, Debi
Comment from bob cullen
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A really beautiful poem to a very special somebody in someone's life. You have worded this delightfully with great rhythm and rhyme. It flows magically. As with all your work Debi, it leaves the reader feeling warm and satisfied. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Hi Bob, ' I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
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I knew her before you joined. We have been friends for a very long time. The artwork was splendiferous and made her all pink. Your words about her made the reader think. She lives in the cave on the ocean floor, when things get too much she shuts the door. I join you in wishing Elaine a Happy Birthday for 165 because mermaids never die, they just thrive. K xx

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Kace, I bet you and Elaine are very close. Good to see friendships last so long.
    I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by Aussie on 19-Feb-2024
    It would be nice to meet all of you in person, never going to happen. We could sit and sip and get to know each other. K xx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    You can be sure of one thing. If I ever had the chance to go to Australia, I would look you up, gf.
reply by Aussie on 19-Feb-2024
    We live at the bottom of the world!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    LOL, and with our government and president, that's how I feel. Like we are at the bottom of the world, but in a different way. Hugs!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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I've known Elaine many years and you are right, she is an extraordinary human being. I love the way you write about a person's true being. It's flattering for them and beautiful for us. Well done you! xo Kiwi

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Hey Kiwi, I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is an absolutely delightful read, Debi! I know Elaine and her lovely posts well and I wish her a very Happy Birthday. I'm sure she'll be very proud of this tribute which is beautifully presented. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    Debbie, you are about as gracious as they come. I appreciate the very kind words for Elaine and her poem. She is a very lovely woman and I know she is also enjoying all the sweet wishes.
    Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Love, Debi