Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-crafted poem. The devil would like to have all of us but thank God he can't. Your poem reads and flows well. I like the rhyming throughout the poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024

Thank you Baltimore (I am ex Detroit) It is always nice to have a win and beat the devil

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

You did a wonderful job in describing the power the devil uses to try to pull you towards his grasp, yet the strength shown in fighting back towards the angel's light. Great job with the rhyming!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024

Thank you MiniLinny. Always nice to have a win especially against such an adversary.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am glad you survived to share this poem with us and I hope you are feeling okay now. The Devil tried to take you and you managed to fight back, a fine poem with good rhymes, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024

Thank you Dolly. All is well

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

There's nothing like a brush with death to bring things into focus. You show that clearly here with your devil versus bright light choice. You use good descriptive words and strong imagery.

Senced (sensed)

Thanks for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024

Thank you Julie, Picked up sensed, spellcheck failed me.:)

Comment from Claire Tennant

Excellent

I was moved and enjoyed this poem. One thing you might want to correct is the word sensed; you have the word senced. The rhythm flows well, and the imagery is fantastic; I can relate to the subject. I wish you well in this endeavour.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024

Thank you for your kind comments Claire. Spellcheck failed me:)

reply by Claire Tennant on 17-Feb-2024

Glad I am not the only one this happens to. Good Luck!