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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

This an inventive poem you have just posted. The sun has that habit of creating unusual patterns on spiderwebs in nature and inside of homes -- all make for fascinating images.

Mark

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Baltimore Born
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Very nice poem. The title of the poem caught my attention. Good flow of words. Your poem paints a good mental picture. Each line connected well with the other. Nice picture too. Good poem.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Baltimore Born on 17-Feb-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from shelley kaye
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i love looking at spider webs... with dew hanging! it's way cool!

a great haiku
love the diamonds in the first line and gold in the satori!
this is definitely a gem!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for the lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend

    gypsy hugs


Comment from GWHARGIS
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That is an undeniably gorgeous image. I love to look out my window in the morning to see the spiderwebs glistening in the morning light. The mention of diamonds and gold made this so fancy. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for the lovely review.

    gypsy hugs


Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Listen you, I'm trying to shut down and get busy with other things, but you went and posted so I absolutely had to pause and take time to read your wonderful work. I am so happy I did. This is a great poem, and the photographs are exceptional. Yes, spider do amazing work as are your poems. Even though I don't do spiders, I will admit they are beautiful architects.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    thank you for taking a break to read and review my poem, you are very kind, Barbara, have a wonderful weekend

    gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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It's amazing how beautiful simple things like dewdrops in a spider web can be, especially when glistening in the sunlight. Beautifully expressed and illustrated!
Hope you're feeling better! ð???

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    I feel terrible. I have a dry cough like there is something in my throat that won't come out. I went to the emergency and the doctor prescribed antibiotics to prevent pneumonia. My cough is nonstop... the medicine hasn't kicked in yet :(

    How are you? I hope you had a happy valentine's day.

    Thank you very much for the lovely review, Big Sister. May you have a wonderful weekend.

    love
    marival



reply by lyenochka on 16-Feb-2024
    Sorry to hear that you've been so sick. But it's still not Covid, right?
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    As far as I know I don't have covid, just a really bad cold. The problem is that we continue to pass the cold among Atticus, nick, micaela, and me. I need to be more cautious to keep my distance, wash my hands more, take vitamin c.

    How are you? I hope you are well.

    Love you