Dreaming of Whimsical Carpets
Faith in the future5 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
It seems that life hasn't treat you well, Nichola. Aladdin, isn't there with his magic carpet. Yet, it is never wrong to dream, for when one dreams reality sometime comes into play. I wish you the best and trust in the God.
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It seems that life hasn't treat you well, Nichola. Aladdin, isn't there with his magic carpet. Yet, it is never wrong to dream, for when one dreams reality sometime comes into play. I wish you the best and trust in the God.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is indeed a whimsical little journey and a pleasure to ride on your floating carpet! It reminded me a bit of Alice in Wonderland. There's a real sense of compelling energy carrying you forward, literally at the whim of another force or faith. It's very original and creative. I don't know if it's the English spelling but I would suggest 'lightning' (without the 'e'). I would also consider using lower case letters at the start of each line because I think it would enhance flow of your already very pleasing free verse. Well done, Nichola! Debbie
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This is indeed a whimsical little journey and a pleasure to ride on your floating carpet! It reminded me a bit of Alice in Wonderland. There's a real sense of compelling energy carrying you forward, literally at the whim of another force or faith. It's very original and creative. I don't know if it's the English spelling but I would suggest 'lightning' (without the 'e'). I would also consider using lower case letters at the start of each line because I think it would enhance flow of your already very pleasing free verse. Well done, Nichola! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Lately, it's been harder to view the future as something other than a hassle however, this write is generous and makes the reader think seriously about people and time. Good luck.
xo Kiwi
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Lately, it's been harder to view the future as something other than a hassle however, this write is generous and makes the reader think seriously about people and time. Good luck.
xo Kiwi
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Dreams of discontent sound more like nightmares as we sometimes drown in sad memories. Keeping a light hearted view of the past helps us to forgive and more on, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
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Dreams of discontent sound more like nightmares as we sometimes drown in sad memories. Keeping a light hearted view of the past helps us to forgive and more on, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Your entire poem and presentation surely felt like a whimsical dream. Well written and well presented with good imagery, colorful descriptions, and a wonderful photo too. Bes wishes!
Alex
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Your entire poem and presentation surely felt like a whimsical dream. Well written and well presented with good imagery, colorful descriptions, and a wonderful photo too. Bes wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
