2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from GWHARGIS
My parents used to tell me that bees in the early fall would be so hellbent on collecting as much nectar as possible that they would get drunk. I used to watch them with amazement. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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My parents used to tell me that bees in the early fall would be so hellbent on collecting as much nectar as possible that they would get drunk. I used to watch them with amazement. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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hehe ... poor little drunk bees
Thank you very much for the lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am worried about this poor bee. I am sure the sun and nectar was very wonderful. Peonies are one of my favorite flowers, but I've struggled growing them in Texas. I guess it's too hot. In my newest novel, they are Sami's favorite flower. I enjoyed this entire presentation.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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I am worried about this poor bee. I am sure the sun and nectar was very wonderful. Peonies are one of my favorite flowers, but I've struggled growing them in Texas. I guess it's too hot. In my newest novel, they are Sami's favorite flower. I enjoyed this entire presentation.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much, Barbara.
gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL! great imagery!
i can totally imagine a bee being drunk after sipping nectar
loved this one!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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LOL! great imagery!
i can totally imagine a bee being drunk after sipping nectar
loved this one!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Shelley, I am happy you like it. A little humor for change.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's a cute painting for your humorous poem about the drunk bee. Those bumblebees really do look drunk sometimes and they love to sleep inside the flowers. A fun poem!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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That's a cute painting for your humorous poem about the drunk bee. Those bumblebees really do look drunk sometimes and they love to sleep inside the flowers. A fun poem!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you, big sister (*=*)
love,
gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, I like the essence and the imagery of this poem. I could see the whole scene. Of special note:
drunk with sun and nectar
(I could use a little of both--lol.)
Perfect photo choice. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy, I like the essence and the imagery of this poem. I could see the whole scene. Of special note:
drunk with sun and nectar
(I could use a little of both--lol.)
Perfect photo choice. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from Baltimore Born
Very nice poem. Your first line made me laugh. Your poem reads and flows well. Your last line gives the reason why the bee is drunk. Nice picture to go along with the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Very nice poem. Your first line made me laugh. Your poem reads and flows well. Your last line gives the reason why the bee is drunk. Nice picture to go along with the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from Julie Helms
Beautiful imagery of bee behavior! It reminds me of a pear tree we used to have that yellow jackets would literally get drunk on the fruit, and then fly around banging into things. Sorry. Your poem was much more delicate than that. Very enjoyable! Julie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Beautiful imagery of bee behavior! It reminds me of a pear tree we used to have that yellow jackets would literally get drunk on the fruit, and then fly around banging into things. Sorry. Your poem was much more delicate than that. Very enjoyable! Julie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy