2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful moonflower poem. I enjoyed reading this poem and it caused me to do some research. I'm going to have to be on the lookout for moonflowers. They are native to Texas. Once again, your presentation was beautiful.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful moonflower poem. I enjoyed reading this poem and it caused me to do some research. I'm going to have to be on the lookout for moonflowers. They are native to Texas. Once again, your presentation was beautiful.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
this haiku was very cool
flowers disrobing...
flowers blushing...
just like people...
nice work with smooth flow and great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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this haiku was very cool
flowers disrobing...
flowers blushing...
just like people...
nice work with smooth flow and great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
Moonflower an interesting concept to ponder such as only at the moon's beckon?
Never in the full Sun?
Sleeping during the daylight hours?
Awaiting the evening hours for the fun to be gone?
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Beautiful artwork as always Miss Gypsy Blue Rose.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Moonflower an interesting concept to ponder such as only at the moon's beckon?
Never in the full Sun?
Sleeping during the daylight hours?
Awaiting the evening hours for the fun to be gone?
...
Beautiful artwork as always Miss Gypsy Blue Rose.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the roses had plenty to blush about seeing the moonflower "disrobe." A great use of personification of these two very different types of flowers. Great illustrations!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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I guess the roses had plenty to blush about seeing the moonflower "disrobe." A great use of personification of these two very different types of flowers. Great illustrations!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, big sister, may you have a fabulous weekend.
love
marival
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a great metaphor you have used to describe the sunset and the new moon. The blushing roses is a great personification with use of its pink as being shy.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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What a great metaphor you have used to describe the sunset and the new moon. The blushing roses is a great personification with use of its pink as being shy.
Excellent.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Lisa, I am happy you like it. A little humor for change.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like the overall presentation of this post Gypsy.
Verse, font color, and artwork mesh together in a nice package.
Disrobing and blushing are a good word/idea couple.
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Do like the overall presentation of this post Gypsy.
Verse, font color, and artwork mesh together in a nice package.
Disrobing and blushing are a good word/idea couple.
Mark
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Indeed, it does, Gypsy!
And you have presented its beauty in a most stunning offering.
Used to grow moonflowers, but they didn't do well in my wild and wooly garden.
A lovely presentation = both visual and emotive.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Indeed, it does, Gypsy!
And you have presented its beauty in a most stunning offering.
Used to grow moonflowers, but they didn't do well in my wild and wooly garden.
A lovely presentation = both visual and emotive.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
Comment from jim vecchio
You should have listed this as "adult content". I feel like a Peeping Tom. I want more, Gypsy! I can't get enough of your words and designs! I'd like to read tht book but i don't know if I could stand seeing all that beauty at once!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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You should have listed this as "adult content". I feel like a Peeping Tom. I want more, Gypsy! I can't get enough of your words and designs! I'd like to read tht book but i don't know if I could stand seeing all that beauty at once!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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LoL
thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.
gypsy
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I hope this weekend brings you much love and happiness!
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You too, Jim
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I'm seeing my daughter again, so I know it will be a great weekend!
Comment from Julie Helms
Oh, this is so awesome! The roses are blushing because the moonflower disrobed. That is brilliant!
Delicately imagined and written. Thanks so much for sharing. I think it's just beautiful. Julie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Oh, this is so awesome! The roses are blushing because the moonflower disrobed. That is brilliant!
Delicately imagined and written. Thanks so much for sharing. I think it's just beautiful. Julie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Julie, I am happy you like it. A little humor for change.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
gypsy