Frosty Mourning
Hurt and loss linger,5 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Not something that any of us are looking forward to experiencing, but every day I keep telling myself that I'd better start getting all my duckets in order. Yes, it's supposed to duck, but duckets are slang for dollars, all that my children will care about. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Not something that any of us are looking forward to experiencing, but every day I keep telling myself that I'd better start getting all my duckets in order. Yes, it's supposed to duck, but duckets are slang for dollars, all that my children will care about. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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I spend much time contemplating duckets.
Comment from Julie Helms
The first thing that comes to my mind is, are they grieving the loss of a child? One of the most tragic possible things. But at least they have one another. Very well done 575, very emotionally striking. Julie
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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The first thing that comes to my mind is, are they grieving the loss of a child? One of the most tragic possible things. But at least they have one another. Very well done 575, very emotionally striking. Julie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your thoughts and praise. Good luck with your own writing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Frosty Mourning, has the proper formatting and creates the sad scene of forlorn survivors pondering many past and future things as they visit the cemetary.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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This 5-7-5, Frosty Mourning, has the proper formatting and creates the sad scene of forlorn survivors pondering many past and future things as they visit the cemetary.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Appreciate your kind words and stars.
Comment from XinaD
This is somber and yet there is something comforting about it, too. Yes, it seems they are going through something tragic, but there they are, facing it together, not alone. Presumably, like they have for many years before. A lot of depth to this poem, well done.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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This is somber and yet there is something comforting about it, too. Yes, it seems they are going through something tragic, but there they are, facing it together, not alone. Presumably, like they have for many years before. A lot of depth to this poem, well done.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Your understanding is appreciated. Thank you for the nice rating, and good luck in your writing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Graveyards are sad places as we take a moment to grieve when leaving flowers for the dead, a poignant write and I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Graveyards are sad places as we take a moment to grieve when leaving flowers for the dead, a poignant write and I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Your nice words are much appreciated. Hope your writing is going well.
