a creation of creativity
creativity is a creation of creativity5 total reviews
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
It's amazing how much you can do with so few words. It reminds me of playing a piano with the pedal pressed down and the reverb on full. Very powerful, almost but not quite overwhelming.
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It's amazing how much you can do with so few words. It reminds me of playing a piano with the pedal pressed down and the reverb on full. Very powerful, almost but not quite overwhelming.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
you need an S on evolve in these two lines...
mankind evolveS into a minute
mankind evolveS into mankind
i very rarely use capitals, too!!
this was quite an interesting poem that leaves one to quietly ponder on
some repetition is good in poems, but too much wears it down sometimes - maybe try some synonyms for creative/creativity?
(but that could be just me lol)
still a thought-provoking poem
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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you need an S on evolve in these two lines...
mankind evolveS into a minute
mankind evolveS into mankind
i very rarely use capitals, too!!
this was quite an interesting poem that leaves one to quietly ponder on
some repetition is good in poems, but too much wears it down sometimes - maybe try some synonyms for creative/creativity?
(but that could be just me lol)
still a thought-provoking poem
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
Comment from JP_Ryan
i had to read this a few times, I understand that the purpose is to make a person think about the content, and it did that, it reminded me phenomenology lectures back in the day, it would suck you in to a spiral of contemplation, but the meaning was really subject to interpretation, thanks for sharing.
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i had to read this a few times, I understand that the purpose is to make a person think about the content, and it did that, it reminded me phenomenology lectures back in the day, it would suck you in to a spiral of contemplation, but the meaning was really subject to interpretation, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
Comment from SimianSavant
review evolve review
review evolve into poetry
poetry evolve into more poetry about bananas
gorilla see banana
gorilla eat banana
gorilla digest banana
gorilla use energy from banana to write review
-Harambe (for President)
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review evolve review
review evolve into poetry
poetry evolve into more poetry about bananas
gorilla see banana
gorilla eat banana
gorilla digest banana
gorilla use energy from banana to write review
-Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. I like the use of repetition although maybe a little much. But a unique look at creation and morals. I enjoyed your poem.
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I thought this was very creative. I like the use of repetition although maybe a little much. But a unique look at creation and morals. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
