Prayer for Comfort
My lonely friends on Valentine's Day12 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, we do need to remember those who have lost a loved one on Valentines Day. Chances are they are not okay. Thank you for the reminder in this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Yes, we do need to remember those who have lost a loved one on Valentines Day. Chances are they are not okay. Thank you for the reminder in this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Prayers for Comfort, has the proper formatting and notes all those hearts that are making it through life without the ones with whom they started. Tough.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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This 5-7-5, Prayers for Comfort, has the proper formatting and notes all those hearts that are making it through life without the ones with whom they started. Tough.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Bill, for your review. I had two friends whose husbands died recently, and they were on my heart when I wrote this.
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for sharing this, Verna. You are so thoughtful and sweet. I'll be joining you because I have friends that have loved ones that are gone. Valentine's Day tends to be sad for them. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sal XOs
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you for sharing this, Verna. You are so thoughtful and sweet. I'll be joining you because I have friends that have loved ones that are gone. Valentine's Day tends to be sad for them. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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It's great when hearts unite for others in prayer. I appreciate your sweetness and your writing. Verna hugs.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.
It's very thoughtful of you.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good luck!
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis  Â
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.
It's very thoughtful of you.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good luck!
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis  Â
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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I like your new quote at the end!
Comment from BethShelby
That is a good prayer. Valentine Day's doesn't bother me. Days and dates aren't something I ever think about, but I know a lot of people do. If someone dies on a Holiday, it ruins that day forever for them.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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That is a good prayer. Valentine Day's doesn't bother me. Days and dates aren't something I ever think about, but I know a lot of people do. If someone dies on a Holiday, it ruins that day forever for them.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the thoughtful review. I had two friends whose husbands died recently, and they were on my mind.
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very thoughtful and sensitive poem. It must be hard for many people, those whose sweethearts are gone, those looking for love without success. Your compassion is evident. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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That is a very thoughtful and sensitive poem. It must be hard for many people, those whose sweethearts are gone, those looking for love without success. Your compassion is evident. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Wendy, for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A sweet and thoughtful 5-7-5 verse incorporating Valentine's Day and a prayer for all those who are on their own, having lost their loved ones. An excellent and sensitive poem of inclusion. Thanks for sharing, Verna. Good luck, Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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A sweet and thoughtful 5-7-5 verse incorporating Valentine's Day and a prayer for all those who are on their own, having lost their loved ones. An excellent and sensitive poem of inclusion. Thanks for sharing, Verna. Good luck, Debbie
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thanks for an excellent review, my friend. I tried to increase the font size on this one, but it didn't work--oh well! I have a couple of friends who are recent widows, and I wanted to encourage them.
Comment from jessizero
I have not lost a sweetheart to death, but they are gone just the same. I appreciate your sentiments. Your syllable count was correct, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I have not lost a sweetheart to death, but they are gone just the same. I appreciate your sentiments. Your syllable count was correct, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. I'm sorry for those who missed out on a great person!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for writing this thinking of others who don't have someone on this day. Picture is nice too . It is sad when you are alone. Very good job
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for writing this thinking of others who don't have someone on this day. Picture is nice too . It is sad when you are alone. Very good job
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Yusita
This is a heartfelt piece for Valentine's Day. It's a joyful day for many, but for others, it's a day of loneliness and mourning. Yes, may God comfort their sad hearts.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is a heartfelt piece for Valentine's Day. It's a joyful day for many, but for others, it's a day of loneliness and mourning. Yes, may God comfort their sad hearts.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Since two good friends of mine are recent widows, they've been on my mind today. Thank you for your thoughtful review.
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I have a friend who became a widow a couple years ago and she is still grieving. I thought of her as I read your poem?
