Birthdays
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Is this for Karen karenina? Maybe is your best friend out of fanstory. In any case. It's a beautiful poem and presentation. You are the best at this kind of poem.
Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Is this for Karen karenina? Maybe is your best friend out of fanstory. In any case. It's a beautiful poem and presentation. You are the best at this kind of poem.
Well done!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy, Karen is married to my brother, Greg. He is a handsome, Dick Clark type of guy who is my hero and I love him with all my heart. He is the only one I have left so he means the world to me. But so does his wife. She is everything I say in the poem. She is as real as can be and as wonderful too.
I am super blessed to have her in my life.
However, Karenina is also one of my special angels and feel the same about her. Thanks for all your kind comments, sweetie.
Love, Debi
Comment from Annmuma
Debi, you are the best when it comes to birthday poetry. As one reads your birthday poems, there is a connection made with the subject. Excellent work and pleasure to read. ann
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Debi, you are the best when it comes to birthday poetry. As one reads your birthday poems, there is a connection made with the subject. Excellent work and pleasure to read. ann
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Ann, thanks for the kind comments for my sister in-law, Karen. She is so excited to read all the greetings. She is having a lot of fun with this.
Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
How lovely to have a sister-in-law who's like a blood relative with whom you have a loving and enduring relationship! I'm sure she'll be proud of this fine birthday tribute. Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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How lovely to have a sister-in-law who's like a blood relative with whom you have a loving and enduring relationship! I'm sure she'll be proud of this fine birthday tribute. Debbie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Oh Debbie, thanks for the kind comments for Karen. She is so excited to read all the sweet comments from so many. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from XinaD
Hi Debi,
Your sister in law sounds like a fantastic person (with great taste in music, I also love BNL). I hope you have the courage to share this with her, I'm sure it would absolutely brighten her special day. Happy Belated to her, and to you: excellent job, I'm sure Karen would be proud and honoured :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Debi,
Your sister in law sounds like a fantastic person (with great taste in music, I also love BNL). I hope you have the courage to share this with her, I'm sure it would absolutely brighten her special day. Happy Belated to her, and to you: excellent job, I'm sure Karen would be proud and honoured :)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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XinaD, I thank you for the very kind comments for Karen. She truly is special and she is enjoying all of these sweet comments for her and her poem. Just as I am. Thanks again, dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a very nice tribute for your sister-in-law.
-I'm sure it has brightened her birthday with
your lovely imagery and rhyme.
-It's very special that you have the relationship you do.
-It sounds line your are also good friends and can rely on one another.
-A very nice concluding verse showing how special she is.
-Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a very nice tribute for your sister-in-law.
-I'm sure it has brightened her birthday with
your lovely imagery and rhyme.
-It's very special that you have the relationship you do.
-It sounds line your are also good friends and can rely on one another.
-A very nice concluding verse showing how special she is.
-Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Pam, I thank you for the very kind comments for Karen. She truly is special and she is enjoying all of these sweet comments for her and her poem. Just as I am. Thanks again, dear friend.
Love, Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi, and I am glad she has been enjoying the poem and responses.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely poem, like all your birthday poems, but it is more special because she is married to your brother. You certainly give a royal treatment to all those you know who have gained another year of life and knowledge. I hope you have recovered from your illness as much as possible. You are in my prayers.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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This is a lovely poem, like all your birthday poems, but it is more special because she is married to your brother. You certainly give a royal treatment to all those you know who have gained another year of life and knowledge. I hope you have recovered from your illness as much as possible. You are in my prayers.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Carol, I thank you for the very kind comments for Karen. She truly is special and she is enjoying all of these sweet comments for her and her poem. Just as I am. Thanks again, dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Mintybee
Happy birthday to Karen! She sounds like a wonderful person. I hope she liked this poem. It was a kind tribute. Your aabb ccdd eeff etc. rhyme scheme worked well.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Happy birthday to Karen! She sounds like a wonderful person. I hope she liked this poem. It was a kind tribute. Your aabb ccdd eeff etc. rhyme scheme worked well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Mintybee, I thank you for the very kind comments for Karen. She truly is special and she is enjoying all of these sweet comments for her and her poem. Just as I am. Thanks again, dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Terry wrote
Such a gentle poem presented in a soft pastel background with pretty script and easy to read font. I enjoy reading poems and stories that involve female characters supporting and encouraging their friends, family and colleagues. This is a delightful poem to read aloud as well. I stumbled only once. where you switched from sister in law to sister in love. But I smiled when I caught myself.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Such a gentle poem presented in a soft pastel background with pretty script and easy to read font. I enjoy reading poems and stories that involve female characters supporting and encouraging their friends, family and colleagues. This is a delightful poem to read aloud as well. I stumbled only once. where you switched from sister in law to sister in love. But I smiled when I caught myself.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Terry, I love how you expressed how you felt about my poem, and especially about stumbling on that one line. Believe me, I do too, but just couldn't part with the in love part. LOL.
I thank you for the very kind comments for Karen. She truly is special and she is enjoying all of these sweet comments for her and her poem. Just as I am. Thanks again, dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely birthday poem in celebration of your sister in law, Karen. It's always good when our siblings partners become our own friends and mates, as it sounds like you and karen are. Beautifully written, as always Debi.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is a lovely birthday poem in celebration of your sister in law, Karen. It's always good when our siblings partners become our own friends and mates, as it sounds like you and karen are. Beautifully written, as always Debi.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Awe, Valda, I thank you so very much for these very lovely comments for Karen's poem. Happy Valentine's Day, my sweet friend.
I appreciate your kindness more than I can say.
Love, Debi
Comment from John Ciarmello
Debi, there is nothing sweeter for a writer than to write about a family member. You can tell there's a real closeness here.
I still love Barbara Streisand. She's my go-to gal. Lol.
Happy Birthday, Karen!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Debi, there is nothing sweeter for a writer than to write about a family member. You can tell there's a real closeness here.
I still love Barbara Streisand. She's my go-to gal. Lol.
Happy Birthday, Karen!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Oh yeah, John, who can ever turn down Barbara S, as she is remarkable.
And yes, so is my sister in-love. Thanks for always being such a cool guy who has the kindest things to say. Thanks Sweet friend. Happy Valentines Day! Love, Debi