The Unwanted Visitor
A range of emotions day3 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Claire,
This is an excellent entry in the Temptation Poetry contest. Your title of your poem The Unwanted Visitor speaks to the essence of temptation in our daily lives and is well reflected in your words and the story you tell with your words is creative, and profound and flows easily when read. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Claire,
This is an excellent entry in the Temptation Poetry contest. Your title of your poem The Unwanted Visitor speaks to the essence of temptation in our daily lives and is well reflected in your words and the story you tell with your words is creative, and profound and flows easily when read. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Eugene, for the review. I have had a difficult experience during the week. It's funny how poetry calms
Comment from RJ Heritage
Rhythmic poem that flows smoothly. I thought it ends a bit abruptly. However, that is quite effective, in giving credence to the the emotions you expressed in the poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Rhythmic poem that flows smoothly. I thought it ends a bit abruptly. However, that is quite effective, in giving credence to the the emotions you expressed in the poem.
RJ
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Julie Helms
Well done poem with good rhyming. I also like the philosophy behind the temptation personified leading one to sin, and the difference between youth and maturity in handling it all. I like the similar repeated line beginning and end, very effective. Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Well done poem with good rhyming. I also like the philosophy behind the temptation personified leading one to sin, and the difference between youth and maturity in handling it all. I like the similar repeated line beginning and end, very effective. Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Julie The subject of this followed an incident in a "future story" saga.
