Our cat Tom (Deceased)
Remembering a past pet6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I shouldn't have smiled as I read this story in a poem contest entry, but I couldn't help. I'm owned by two orange male tabbies. They'll never forgive me. This is an excellently written poem and the rhyming scheme and flow are great. Good luck with the contest.
I shouldn't have smiled as I read this story in a poem contest entry, but I couldn't help. I'm owned by two orange male tabbies. They'll never forgive me. This is an excellently written poem and the rhyming scheme and flow are great. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
Comment from pome lover
cute, cute story. If true, are they speaking to you yet?
I think my favorite two lines are the first two of the last verse.
and the line about the cat stew, well, you probably crossed the line, there.
I'm just kidding. I'm guessing that this is probably fiction. At any rate, it was original and funny.
Katharine
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
cute, cute story. If true, are they speaking to you yet?
I think my favorite two lines are the first two of the last verse.
and the line about the cat stew, well, you probably crossed the line, there.
I'm just kidding. I'm guessing that this is probably fiction. At any rate, it was original and funny.
Katharine
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments. You will be happy to know Tom only lived in my mind.
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whew! :)
Comment from Brenda Strauser
The writing was good and the rhyming. I just lost my cat about 7 months ago and I miss her dearly. She had a heart problem. Very good job I wasn't sure if this actually happened or not
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
The writing was good and the rhyming. I just lost my cat about 7 months ago and I miss her dearly. She had a heart problem. Very good job I wasn't sure if this actually happened or not
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your comments. Tom only lived in my mind.
Comment from Yusita
Although I'm so sad for the poor kitty, I must say you told the story in a very humorous way that made me almost feel guilty for chuckling! lol. Very creative and well-written. Rest in peace, Tom!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
Although I'm so sad for the poor kitty, I must say you told the story in a very humorous way that made me almost feel guilty for chuckling! lol. Very creative and well-written. Rest in peace, Tom!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Yhank you for your kind comments. You will be happy to know Tom lived only in my mind.
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
You did a good job telling your story in a poem. Your poem flowed and your rhymes were fun. There were places I'd add commas, but it's not a big deal. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
You did a good job telling your story in a poem. Your poem flowed and your rhymes were fun. There were places I'd add commas, but it's not a big deal. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments
Comment from Julie Helms
Poor Tom! Nice rhyming and I like your commentary on your family scolding you appropriately! Twist at the end was humorous. Maybe then all will be forgiven. :-)
I'm rally in the pooh (really?)
Julie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
Poor Tom! Nice rhyming and I like your commentary on your family scolding you appropriately! Twist at the end was humorous. Maybe then all will be forgiven. :-)
I'm rally in the pooh (really?)
Julie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hi Jjulie. Well done, rally (really) not picked up by spell-check. Have corrected it I hope. Thanks