Comment from Jeano

Excellent

I really like your poem minus any "a's". Curious as to the writing process on something like this contest. Write the poem or story and then go back and replace with words without an 'a'? Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Thanks for your read and positive feedback.

reply by Jeano on 13-Feb-2024

You're welcome.

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. The picture is beautiful and goes well.with the poem. I could follow along well. Good job keeping the letter A out. Great job

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and provide feedback.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I like the atmosphere you've created here and the artwork accompanying this piece is a perfect fit. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest. :)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and provide feedback.