Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

It's amazing how our environment is so interrelated. In first grade we had a science unit about that, and it was a hard concept for 6-year-olds, but not for me. It seems every time I look around, I see another example of it. Thank you for sharing this perfect poem with us.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

loved the connection between a flower and a god using dewdrops
great imagistic word choices and a cool (and perfect) picture
and a smooth flow from like to line
like how you did 'fall', too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful day.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was beautiful. It's amazing where you can find God. I had a friend who took one year to write about finding God every day. One day she was on a walk. One day a coffee shop. But every day she had a moment when He spoke to her or showed himself. This made me think of that. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Gretchen. I'm happy you like it.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I think everything in creation has the mark of the the Lord, our Creator. We like to say everything and everyone has His fingerprints. Certainly, the beauty of the symmetry of the concentric circles of ripples reflects our amazing God!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024

Yes ❤️

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Marival