Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Raul.
This is so true. Especially in the ages 2-4 and the teenage years.
This poem uses line breaks well and the artwork matches well.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Thank you and the same to you too!

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Feb-2024

You're welcome and thank you.
Joan

Comment from Jeano

Excellent

Ha, isn't that the truth. Perfect photo for your poem. I didn't enter this contest but I'm curious. Did you just write a poem and then go back and change words that had an 'a' in them? Pretty sure that's how I would have had to do it. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Thank you!

reply by Jeano on 13-Feb-2024

You're welcome.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Very true commentary on the attitude of children! And you did it without a single "a". You chose a perfect picture to accompany this. Best of luck in the contest! Julie

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Thank you so much! I hope I win first place!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a cute poem, and I'm surprised that you managed such a sweet piece without using the letter "A." I especially like the last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024

Thank you for your encouragement and kind review!