Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 14"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, this is a nail-biter of a chapter! And you left us hanging on the cliff also. Bobby seems to be a lunatic, hitting Dion's car like that. I can't imaging what Judy's experiencing, and Dion also. Exciting but dangerous chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Wow, this is a nail-biter of a chapter! And you left us hanging on the cliff also. Bobby seems to be a lunatic, hitting Dion's car like that. I can't imaging what Judy's experiencing, and Dion also. Exciting but dangerous chapter.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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HAPPY VALENTINES DAY, CAROL
Appreciate the review. Bobby definitely was a lunatic and he's possibly destroyed some more lives. I am glad you are enjoying the spills and chills.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Deare me, that is a close call and still is. The man is drunk and completely out of his mind. What the heck does he think he's doing?
You write this so very well, Carol. I can't wait to reading on. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Deare me, that is a close call and still is. The man is drunk and completely out of his mind. What the heck does he think he's doing?
You write this so very well, Carol. I can't wait to reading on. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, ULLA
Yes, the road is about to get real rocky for Bobby and Dion. Hold your breath and hang on to your seat. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I marveled at how well you described the Judy/Bobby scene with the beer and sandwiches and Judy's excuses. But the truck chase is phenomenal. It is so clear I felt like I was watching it play out on a screen. You really know how to rev up the action and end a chapter in suspense.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I marveled at how well you described the Judy/Bobby scene with the beer and sandwiches and Judy's excuses. But the truck chase is phenomenal. It is so clear I felt like I was watching it play out on a screen. You really know how to rev up the action and end a chapter in suspense.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Lorraine. You have no idea how terrified I was to write the chase scene. I'd never done anything like that before and I was so afraid it wouldn't come off realistically. So far, everyone seems to enjoy it. What a relief!!!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Wow, this story is really getting exciting. You make sure the reader, at least this reader, will read the next chapter. What an amazing story. I hope you intend to publish this.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Wow, this story is really getting exciting. You make sure the reader, at least this reader, will read the next chapter. What an amazing story. I hope you intend to publish this.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I've always said I would like to self-publish if just so there is a copy collecting dust after I die, but I've never done it. Maybe this will be the one. Thanks again, April.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
I CANNOT believe you're going to stop there, leaving me hanging off the edge of the road with the both of them!!
Very gripping writing! Excellent action and drama. Some good humor with the Velcro bra, too. :-)
Julie
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I CANNOT believe you're going to stop there, leaving me hanging off the edge of the road with the both of them!!
Very gripping writing! Excellent action and drama. Some good humor with the Velcro bra, too. :-)
Julie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Julie. I am told that "cliff hangers" are my trademark, but this was my first car chase and I worried if I could make the suspense strong enough. I'm thrilled that it came across. (Oh, to be honest...I thought of you when I wrote about the bra. LOL)
Smiles, Carol
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Haha, I'm not sure that's a good thing but, thanks!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is well described mayhem with Bobby not caring who he kills, just as long as he kills his daughter's friend. He obviously has alcohol induced insanity. If the world was fair, Dion and Judy would survive, but . . .
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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This is well described mayhem with Bobby not caring who he kills, just as long as he kills his daughter's friend. He obviously has alcohol induced insanity. If the world was fair, Dion and Judy would survive, but . . .
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Wow...You honor me and I feel blessed. Thank you...I will do my best to save Dion and Judy but I can't make any promises. thank you again, Carol. I am thrilled that you ae enjoying the story. I am too!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
I am truly enjoying your story as it moves along very well. Your sentence structure your paragraph structuring. The whole thing is super well done. Keep up with your wonderful writing and you keep sharing with us.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I am truly enjoying your story as it moves along very well. Your sentence structure your paragraph structuring. The whole thing is super well done. Keep up with your wonderful writing and you keep sharing with us.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Patric, What an awesome review. I am so grateful for the comments. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You did a great job describing the action and the emotion of these scenes. One of the best writings I've read on this site. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope Bobby is the one injured this time.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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You did a great job describing the action and the emotion of these scenes. One of the best writings I've read on this site. Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope Bobby is the one injured this time.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Oh, wow. You've blown me away, Barbara. I was terrified I couldn't write the scene the way it should be and I am beyond grateful for your comments. Thank you so much....Wishes just might come true...LOL
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Bobby sounds like the street kids around where I live these days. Shootings three or four days a week. Two men beaten unconscious right on Main St. one day apart by a group of teens. All he really needs is a good ol' fashioned country boy butt whooping. As I'm sure I've said before. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Bobby sounds like the street kids around where I live these days. Shootings three or four days a week. Two men beaten unconscious right on Main St. one day apart by a group of teens. All he really needs is a good ol' fashioned country boy butt whooping. As I'm sure I've said before. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Did my truck chase come across as realistic? It's the first I've written and it's definitely harder than on a tv or movie screen. Sounds like life's gotten crazy in your neighborhood too. I'm glad I'm in the country - far far away from the shootings. Bobby's about to find out who's really in charge of his life.
Thank you so much for being so kind to me. I appreciate the glitter. Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Truck chase was great! I'm not just kind to you. You're a sweetheart of a person far as I can tell, who I enjoy reading and communicating with! :-)
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Now I'm blushing.... too bad my family doesn't act like I am...unless they want money of course. LOL
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
OMG! He's going to kill Dion, and the drugs in his pick-up will be found, oh my goodness. I don't like what's coming on now! Is there another chapter? I'll have to check. Great writing again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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OMG! He's going to kill Dion, and the drugs in his pick-up will be found, oh my goodness. I don't like what's coming on now! Is there another chapter? I'll have to check. Great writing again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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The next chapter is in the making....It's not going to be pretty for any of them. Thanks for reading and enjoying, Sandra. I truly appreciate it. Have a great day!
Hugs and love, Carol