Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 12"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from LJbutterfly
You've got me on the edge of my seat. This chapter is so action packed, I feel uneasy as I envision Bobby and Isabella. Bobby is going to make a plan with Juan. What? It won't be good. Someone is going to get hurt. I'll see you in the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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You've got me on the edge of my seat. This chapter is so action packed, I feel uneasy as I envision Bobby and Isabella. Bobby is going to make a plan with Juan. What? It won't be good. Someone is going to get hurt. I'll see you in the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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No, nothing Bobby does is good. I can guarantee you that. Thanks for reading and leaving me such nice comments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That sounds ominous, Carol, I really hope he's not going after Dion, or Isabella. I'm sure Gabby will be in for it when she gets home, if she gets home! I'm off to read the next chapter now. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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That sounds ominous, Carol, I really hope he's not going after Dion, or Isabella. I'm sure Gabby will be in for it when she gets home, if she gets home! I'm off to read the next chapter now. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hold on tight...the roads about to get rocky! Sending you smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
I'm starting to get the feeling that Bobby is trouble! Lots of action and gripping plot keep me reading.
"The incessive pounding"
I don't think incessive is a word. Do you mean incessant?
Off to read the next chapter! Julie
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I'm starting to get the feeling that Bobby is trouble! Lots of action and gripping plot keep me reading.
"The incessive pounding"
I don't think incessive is a word. Do you mean incessant?
Off to read the next chapter! Julie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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It's two in the morning, my friend and I too am wondering what I meant. LOL I shall check. According to the dictionary....drum roll.... Incessive is an adjective that means intense, active, or continuous. Whew! I thought I'd blown it again. Thanks for keeping me on my toes!
Smiles, Carol
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I stand corrected! It didn't show up in Merriam Webster for some reason. Get some sleep! :-)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is really scary. Bobby needs to be locked up and the key thrown away. Judy doesn't know who she has picked for a boyfriend, but I hope she never makes him angry. The Irish couple sound like very special people.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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This is really scary. Bobby needs to be locked up and the key thrown away. Judy doesn't know who she has picked for a boyfriend, but I hope she never makes him angry. The Irish couple sound like very special people.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Hello, Carol
So glad to see you. Yes, the Irish couple have hearts of gold. The complete opposite of Bobby. But I fear the grim reaper awaits him and lives will change.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've come to the conclusion that we live in an angry would these days. Almost everyone we come in contact with is mad about someone or out of control. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I've come to the conclusion that we live in an angry would these days. Almost everyone we come in contact with is mad about someone or out of control. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Now you hit the nail on the head.... Anger has exploded and seems to consume so many. I had to write a 100 word fantasy flash just to escape.... Didn't last long.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Explain to me why that man is not still behind bars.?
He should never be given custody of Gabby again.
He is an out-of-control alcoholic rage machine. Let him have a much-needed permanent accident.
Karen
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Explain to me why that man is not still behind bars.?
He should never be given custody of Gabby again.
He is an out-of-control alcoholic rage machine. Let him have a much-needed permanent accident.
Karen
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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LOL...Keep reading....he soon will make a big mistake. Hopefully before he hurts any moe people. He's crazy!
Thanks for the review. Smiles to you as always.
Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This not at all good what Bobby's planning. Somebody will get hurt, probably Dion or Isabella. I don't think Bobby knows Dion is innocent. This is not good. Bobby needs to be stopped.
"The hell with you woman. (90% sure a comma is needed after 'you' you're addressing 'woman')
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This not at all good what Bobby's planning. Somebody will get hurt, probably Dion or Isabella. I don't think Bobby knows Dion is innocent. This is not good. Bobby needs to be stopped.
"The hell with you woman. (90% sure a comma is needed after 'you' you're addressing 'woman')
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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You are right! But then I thought I put one there but obviously I didn't. I have two chapters completed and ready to post.... they are action packed and a bit nerve racking I think. Bobby's plan isn't a good one!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is quite a compelling story as you have told it. I enjoyed listening to it, and I also enjoyed your slang words from time to time and it made it sound so real like it was really happening before me. Have a good day. May God bless you with all of your writing. Patric.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This is quite a compelling story as you have told it. I enjoyed listening to it, and I also enjoyed your slang words from time to time and it made it sound so real like it was really happening before me. Have a good day. May God bless you with all of your writing. Patric.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Patric. Though it is fiction, much of it is drawn from personal family tragedies. I'm glad that it came across as sincere and real. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Somehow I think Bobby needs a restraining order,mascif that will work, which I don't think, but he needs to be lacked away forever, what a turd, Poor Gabby, a great post, my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Somehow I think Bobby needs a restraining order,mascif that will work, which I don't think, but he needs to be lacked away forever, what a turd, Poor Gabby, a great post, my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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That man needs something... and I think he just may get it! Probably not what he expected, but life never works out that way when you're busy messing with someone else's life.
Hugs, Carol
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People like Bobby never prosper but they?can do damage
Comment from Wendy G
Sorry not to have a six for you. I am glad Gabby is safe, at least for the moment. Her father is crazy and dangerous, and Isabella is in danger, as is Dion. So dramatic, but I know it is based on fact, so I am unnerved by all Isabella has had to go through, and we are still at the beginning! Very well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Sorry not to have a six for you. I am glad Gabby is safe, at least for the moment. Her father is crazy and dangerous, and Isabella is in danger, as is Dion. So dramatic, but I know it is based on fact, so I am unnerved by all Isabella has had to go through, and we are still at the beginning! Very well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Never apologize about a six...You give me so muchmore than that with all your support. Remember please, it's fiction but yes, I am drawing on a lot of pain and sorrow my family has endured. Unfortunately, there's more to come.
Hugs, Carol