I Was Tempted
The cost was too great.4 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
HarryT,
Congrats on your first place win in the Temptation Poetry contest. Your title of your poem I Was Tempted speaks to the daily challenge we all must face. The essence of temptation is well reflected in your words and the story you tell with your words is creative, and profound and flows easily when read. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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HarryT,
Congrats on your first place win in the Temptation Poetry contest. Your title of your poem I Was Tempted speaks to the daily challenge we all must face. The essence of temptation is well reflected in your words and the story you tell with your words is creative, and profound and flows easily when read. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for reading my work. Appreciated.
Comment from Annmuma
This is beautifully done and the temptation explored is the ultimate temptation, but certainly can be applied to every temptation however small. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is beautifully done and the temptation explored is the ultimate temptation, but certainly can be applied to every temptation however small. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you again for the read and the six star honor.
Comment from mermaids
Your poetic form here is excellent. Your rhyming of words is smooth and has an almost musical feel to it. I like how this lady refuses evil despite a possible difficult road ahead of her. Inner peace is more important. You tell a tale here in poetic form that has a powerful theme.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Your poetic form here is excellent. Your rhyming of words is smooth and has an almost musical feel to it. I like how this lady refuses evil despite a possible difficult road ahead of her. Inner peace is more important. You tell a tale here in poetic form that has a powerful theme.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you again. Your read and response is deeply appreciated.
Comment from Julie Helms
A poem on the original tempter! You do a good job developing a story through your poetry. And you made the right decision in the end! Perfect artwork to go with it, the internal struggle personified with the devil on the shoulder.
I know this is poetry, and you may have done this intentionally, but I thought this sounded a little awkward
When my help right here?" (my help's right here)
Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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A poem on the original tempter! You do a good job developing a story through your poetry. And you made the right decision in the end! Perfect artwork to go with it, the internal struggle personified with the devil on the shoulder.
I know this is poetry, and you may have done this intentionally, but I thought this sounded a little awkward
When my help right here?" (my help's right here)
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thanks for your help again. I will edit.
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You are welcome, again, although I have no idea who you are because this is blind! But always welcome! :-)