Very Ordinary Love Epic
French Bicycle/Small Rodent5 total reviews
Comment from Saki the Artist
Wow! You even managed to make a title fit in. It's challenging to do this level of constrained acrostic and still manage to come up with something that isn't impossible to comprehend, yet you did it--and it flows well in terms of logical escalation of events. NICE.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Wow! You even managed to make a title fit in. It's challenging to do this level of constrained acrostic and still manage to come up with something that isn't impossible to comprehend, yet you did it--and it flows well in terms of logical escalation of events. NICE.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Very generous, Saki. Many thanks.
Comment from Jeano
I've read them all and I think yours has come the closest to what they were asking for. This wasn't an easy assignment, I tried several different words but couldn't quite get it. You have my vote. Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I've read them all and I think yours has come the closest to what they were asking for. This wasn't an easy assignment, I tried several different words but couldn't quite get it. You have my vote. Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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So kind, Jeano. Many thanks.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
Congratulations, this is really well executed and comprehensible. For a 4x4 it's exceptional. I like the dark approach you took. The only thing I think it might benefit from is some additional attention to presentation. I believe in the advanced editor you can force the lines not to wrap. I should have made some notes on this in the contest. However the simple presentation does reflect the demeanor of your reluctant Cupid : )
Thanks for a great read,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Congratulations, this is really well executed and comprehensible. For a 4x4 it's exceptional. I like the dark approach you took. The only thing I think it might benefit from is some additional attention to presentation. I believe in the advanced editor you can force the lines not to wrap. I should have made some notes on this in the contest. However the simple presentation does reflect the demeanor of your reluctant Cupid : )
Thanks for a great read,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Such a gratifying response. Very many thanks. I am a Newbie and still grappling with the presentational elements.
Comment from Gunner Lil
I think you did a very good job. I looked at this contest and I said to myself, "You ain't there yet." I love the picture that you chose.
The poem is a good read and does say it all.
Good luck and Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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I think you did a very good job. I looked at this contest and I said to myself, "You ain't there yet." I love the picture that you chose.
The poem is a good read and does say it all.
Good luck and Thank you!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Julie Helms
The lines should be:
Love
Ovel
Velo
Elov
The L - O - V - E always stays in that sequence just one letter bumped off and put on the end each time. Your first and last lines are correct.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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The lines should be:
Love
Ovel
Velo
Elov
The L - O - V - E always stays in that sequence just one letter bumped off and put on the end each time. Your first and last lines are correct.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the heads up, Julie. Back to the drawing board.
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It wasn't stated very clearly in the contest rules. It wasn't till I clicked back to their link to the previous contest that I saw that's what was going on.
