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His Zeal For A Meal

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
THIs is a a funny poem using some foods that some, like me. wouldn't eat, like eel. But that is in sushi which many do eat. I see you also used peotic license to create words like slicement and turner on.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent poem and presentation! It has good descriptive words and imagery. This was fun to read. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it. Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
    Thank you! I've submitted meaningful poems in this contest before, and got nowhere. So, I thought I'd try a little humor!
Comment from XinaD
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What I like: I like watching cooking shows, and this was a very fun piece to read. The first time I can say a poem is mouthwatering ;)

What needs work: Some of the rhymes felt like a bit of a stretch and so they took away from the rhythm of the work.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
    I agree about the rhymes. I really wanted to see if a humorous work would do better than some of my more serious ones.