2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Canceled Baby Shower"x
7 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
This poem is indeed ominous, and we can only imagine the terrible loss. Those gathered can only try to find a way to go forward, and hope to find strength after this loss.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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This poem is indeed ominous, and we can only imagine the terrible loss. Those gathered can only try to find a way to go forward, and hope to find strength after this loss.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm guessing by the canceled baby shower that the infant was lost. That is a horrible situation some mothers have to go through. It does hurt. You did a good job with emotion in this poem without really expressing it. It's understood. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I'm guessing by the canceled baby shower that the infant was lost. That is a horrible situation some mothers have to go through. It does hurt. You did a good job with emotion in this poem without really expressing it. It's understood. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Yes you are right.
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Comment from shelley kaye
this kinda has a hemingway baby shoe feel to it
nice.
great imagery and smooth flow of lines
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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this kinda has a hemingway baby shoe feel to it
nice.
great imagery and smooth flow of lines
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Yes, that's true, Hemingway wrote haiku.
Thank you very much, Shelley. Have a nice day (*÷*)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe, this one made me sad. Having suffered a miscarriage at 16 weeks, I immediately remembered the devastation and heartbreak. No reason for it other than nature and God's will. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Awe, this one made me sad. Having suffered a miscarriage at 16 weeks, I immediately remembered the devastation and heartbreak. No reason for it other than nature and God's will. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
I appreciate your understanding and excellent review.
May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I've known several ladies who have had repeated miscarriages and I'm so sad for them. I would think the "canceled baby shower" would be even harder because by then the pregnancy was further along.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I've known several ladies who have had repeated miscarriages and I'm so sad for them. I would think the "canceled baby shower" would be even harder because by then the pregnancy was further along.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for understanding my poem and for the wonderful review. Have a great day.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Jan Anderegg
Oh my goodness. This is so sad, and so moving. :-(
I loved the artwork you used to enhance the poem. It's beautiful. No errors noted.
Just beautiful.
Jan
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Oh my goodness. This is so sad, and so moving. :-(
I loved the artwork you used to enhance the poem. It's beautiful. No errors noted.
Just beautiful.
Jan
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, this is quite a sad story in a very few words. Well done! Thanks for the notes on modern Haiku; they are helpful for the reader to understand the form. You're always teaching us, which is great! Carol
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Wow, this is quite a sad story in a very few words. Well done! Thanks for the notes on modern Haiku; they are helpful for the reader to understand the form. You're always teaching us, which is great! Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome, Gypsy. Loved your Haiku. Carol