2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from kahpot
Very clever, the wanders in the cemetery are going to have a peaceful night, even restless souls must deserve one, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Very clever, the wanders in the cemetery are going to have a peaceful night, even restless souls must deserve one, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
And there's that murderous crow in the background of the artwork. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us. Cemeteries are scary enough without having no moon and a crow.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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And there's that murderous crow in the background of the artwork. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us. Cemeteries are scary enough without having no moon and a crow.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
wouldn't that be werewolves rest in peace? LOL!
(first thought when i read lol)
but shadows are cool, too - there's always a shadow - even in no light...
good haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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wouldn't that be werewolves rest in peace? LOL!
(first thought when i read lol)
but shadows are cool, too - there's always a shadow - even in no light...
good haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I absolutely love the picture. And, of course, the poem is excellent. I enjoy your lessons. And repetition I hope will sear it to my brain. Have a good week, and always keep writing. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I absolutely love the picture. And, of course, the poem is excellent. I enjoy your lessons. And repetition I hope will sear it to my brain. Have a good week, and always keep writing. :-) Karen
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Love it! Yes, because it's moonless, there is not light to cause a shadow and since it's in a cemetery, we know the old phrase "Rest In Peace" is used a lot there. But in this case, it's the shadows that are resting!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Love it! Yes, because it's moonless, there is not light to cause a shadow and since it's in a cemetery, we know the old phrase "Rest In Peace" is used a lot there. But in this case, it's the shadows that are resting!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Yes, you got it. (*÷*)
Thank you very much, big sister. It feels good to write haiku again. Lately I've been writing a lot of free verse but that's okay.
Love
Marival
Comment from royowen
It's good to know the shadows are resting and at peace, so the thing that one normally thinks that there is no good dwelling in a graveyard, but no only peace here, as I've discovered there, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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It's good to know the shadows are resting and at peace, so the thing that one normally thinks that there is no good dwelling in a graveyard, but no only peace here, as I've discovered there, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Yusita
I don't know how you always manage to be so unique and creative with your wordbrush (paintbrush but with words hehe). I'm always mesmerized by your imagery. "Shadows Rest In Peace"... that is quite epic.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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I don't know how you always manage to be so unique and creative with your wordbrush (paintbrush but with words hehe). I'm always mesmerized by your imagery. "Shadows Rest In Peace"... that is quite epic.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs