Chromatic Hierarchy
Some guys are never satisfied3 total reviews
Comment from Jeano
Well, in eight words you summed up infidelity very well. Nicely done. I like that photo you chose. I'd like to see it hanging somewhere in my home. Good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Well, in eight words you summed up infidelity very well. Nicely done. I like that photo you chose. I'd like to see it hanging somewhere in my home. Good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Jeano. That helps. At the moment it is on course to crash and burn.
Comment from Yusita
I think you've done very well with this prompt. I find these so challenging as it's quite hard to be coherent and convey a complete thought/story with such restrictions and so few syllables... but I think you did well with this piece! You managed to give a summary of a story with just those few words.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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I think you've done very well with this prompt. I find these so challenging as it's quite hard to be coherent and convey a complete thought/story with such restrictions and so few syllables... but I think you did well with this piece! You managed to give a summary of a story with just those few words.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Yusita.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the good rhymes.
The art work complements well.
I like your notes too.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the good rhymes.
The art work complements well.
I like your notes too.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you.
