Comment from sherrygreywolf

Excellent

Even though I was unfamiliar with the Korean expression, I think I would have figured it out. It is so descriptive of that feeling when you see someone and just know they are the one. Beautiful entry for this contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Jeano

Excellent

This was not an easy prompt, but you managed to pull it off. I liked your use of mojo, it gave life to the other person. Nicely done. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

thanks it is from the classic blues song

i got a gypsy woman
giving me advice
I got my mojo working
it is not working on you.

reply by Jeano on 06-Feb-2024

I should have recognized that!

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Interesting! Excellent poem. using 15 words. It has good descriptions, emotions, and imagery. Helpful Author Note. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

the inspiration was the classic blues song

thanks it is from the classic blues song

i got a gypsy woman
giving me advice
I got my mojo working
it is not working on you.

Comment from Navada

Excellent

That is an evocative image to communicate the idea of instant attraction. I think it works well to convey this. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest. :)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

the inspiration was the classic blues song

thanks it is from the classic blues song

i got a gypsy woman
giving me advice
I got my mojo working
it is not working on you.