At First Sight
Love...9 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Simple, packed with emotion. I feel your words. Great imagery and tone. The picture made the moment magical. Your beautiful words together with the picture make an amazing presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
Simple, packed with emotion. I feel your words. Great imagery and tone. The picture made the moment magical. Your beautiful words together with the picture make an amazing presentation.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from sherrygreywolf
What a sweet little poem. Made me sigh and remember being young and falling in love the first time. Good job with this entry to the Love Poem contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
What a sweet little poem. Made me sigh and remember being young and falling in love the first time. Good job with this entry to the Love Poem contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. :)
Comment from Jeano
This is very relatable if you ever had that magical 'Love at first sight' happen to you. You captured that feeling and with such a sweetness. Very well done. You might have written a winner with this one. Good Luck
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
This is very relatable if you ever had that magical 'Love at first sight' happen to you. You captured that feeling and with such a sweetness. Very well done. You might have written a winner with this one. Good Luck
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thanks for such a wonderful review. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
like the image and also the romantic words.
The movement of the image makes the picture dazzling.
And that is what love is supposed to look like; the couple captures each other emotions.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
like the image and also the romantic words.
The movement of the image makes the picture dazzling.
And that is what love is supposed to look like; the couple captures each other emotions.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from Lisasview
I love your poem and it makes me think of my life with the love of my life...
Fabulous...really fabulous...
Perfect Love Poem....
Lisasview...........................
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
I love your poem and it makes me think of my life with the love of my life...
Fabulous...really fabulous...
Perfect Love Poem....
Lisasview...........................
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you, l really appreciate you. :)
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I voted for you.... so we will see what happens...
Lisa
Comment from Navada
It's an interesting concept, isn't it - the different ways that people capture each other's attention, and the affairs of the heart that can stem from this. Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
It's an interesting concept, isn't it - the different ways that people capture each other's attention, and the affairs of the heart that can stem from this. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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It is! Thank you for this wonderful review, l really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It has good descriptions, emotions, and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it. Adorable.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
Excellent writing. It has good descriptions, emotions, and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it. Adorable.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you, l'm really glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Julie Helms
Wonderful poem! I love your transition from caught my attention to captured my heart. It indicates a pursuer and a willing pursuee (?). Best of luck in the contest! Julie
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
Wonderful poem! I love your transition from caught my attention to captured my heart. It indicates a pursuer and a willing pursuee (?). Best of luck in the contest! Julie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you, for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from Yusita
This is a perfect example of a "short but sweet" piece, and quite literally, too! Beautiful sentiments beautifully expressed. Loved how you used the word "caught" and then "captured" to convey the deepening and development of the relationship/connection.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
This is a perfect example of a "short but sweet" piece, and quite literally, too! Beautiful sentiments beautifully expressed. Loved how you used the word "caught" and then "captured" to convey the deepening and development of the relationship/connection.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate you reading my poem.