Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Simple, packed with emotion. I feel your words. Great imagery and tone. The picture made the moment magical. Your beautiful words together with the picture make an amazing presentation.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024

Thank you, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from sherrygreywolf

Excellent

What a sweet little poem. Made me sigh and remember being young and falling in love the first time. Good job with this entry to the Love Poem contest.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024

Thank you so much. :)

Comment from Jeano

Excellent

This is very relatable if you ever had that magical 'Love at first sight' happen to you. You captured that feeling and with such a sweetness. Very well done. You might have written a winner with this one. Good Luck

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thanks for such a wonderful review. :)

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

like the image and also the romantic words.
The movement of the image makes the picture dazzling.
And that is what love is supposed to look like; the couple captures each other emotions.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

I love your poem and it makes me think of my life with the love of my life...
Fabulous...really fabulous...
Perfect Love Poem....
Lisasview...........................

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thank you, l really appreciate you. :)

reply by Lisasview on 07-Feb-2024

I voted for you.... so we will see what happens...
Lisa

Comment from Navada

Excellent

It's an interesting concept, isn't it - the different ways that people capture each other's attention, and the affairs of the heart that can stem from this. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

It is! Thank you for this wonderful review, l really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Excellent writing. It has good descriptions, emotions, and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it. Adorable.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thank you, l'm really glad you liked it. :)

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Wonderful poem! I love your transition from caught my attention to captured my heart. It indicates a pursuer and a willing pursuee (?). Best of luck in the contest! Julie

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thank you, for reading my poem and for this great review. :)

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is a perfect example of a "short but sweet" piece, and quite literally, too! Beautiful sentiments beautifully expressed. Loved how you used the word "caught" and then "captured" to convey the deepening and development of the relationship/connection.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thank you, l appreciate you reading my poem.