Comment from
Jeano
LOL! That's how its done in bird land, and the bigger the bird... This truly made me laugh. Opposites indeed do attract. Those swans can't hold a candle to geese though. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It has good descriptions, emotions, and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
Comment from
rspoet
This is an excellent short poem for the love contest
with a nice contrast between opposites: silent/loud, patience,/impatience
even black /white in the photograph. Yes. opposite do attract.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
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