Comment from
Gunner Lil
A very good poem for the contest.
Enjoyed reading it as it is an easy read with a fine flow. Like the rhyming.
You should consider a picture.
Thank you and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I'm not sure what (Fattagram) means and perhaps there is a little overindulgence going on here! Or you are just playing with made up words for your poetry, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
Thanks for your feedback.