Comment from
rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the fifteen word love contest
with very nice description and addition of the pair of rhymes.
Good choice of photograph to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing and rhyming. It is full of good emotion and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024