Oh What a Night
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Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-word love poem, Oh What a Night, has the proper formatting and zeroes in on this important moment where intension and desire met and became happy. Nice.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
This fifteen-word love poem, Oh What a Night, has the proper formatting and zeroes in on this important moment where intension and desire met and became happy. Nice.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Baltimore Born
Congratulations on winning the contest. Nice poem, simple but effective. Your poem reads and flow well. Your picture accentuates the poem nicely. I got to bookmark this poem. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
Congratulations on winning the contest. Nice poem, simple but effective. Your poem reads and flow well. Your picture accentuates the poem nicely. I got to bookmark this poem. Congratulations.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from mermaids
This is a romantic and dreamy use of words. You tell a story in your poem and it is a happy one. Your words make the reader feel good. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
This is a romantic and dreamy use of words. You tell a story in your poem and it is a happy one. Your words make the reader feel good. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
Well, congratulations on your contest win, Gunner. I enjoyed this and voted. When you know, you know. I'm glad to see a decisive man. Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
Well, congratulations on your contest win, Gunner. I enjoyed this and voted. When you know, you know. I'm glad to see a decisive man. Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you! You're so kind.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You said it all in that tiny poem. I write these also, I love how I sweat over these little babies more than I do for a story. Poetry, as I am learning here, is not for the squeamish. Good work here. Karen
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
You said it all in that tiny poem. I write these also, I love how I sweat over these little babies more than I do for a story. Poetry, as I am learning here, is not for the squeamish. Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Thesis
I love it. A short, straight-to-the-point account of a love story gone right. It explains the scene, the emotion, the feeling, the anxiety of the moment, and the desired result. Not bad in so few words.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
I love it. A short, straight-to-the-point account of a love story gone right. It explains the scene, the emotion, the feeling, the anxiety of the moment, and the desired result. Not bad in so few words.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your well deserved win. In fifteen short, succinct words you described an entire love story. In her eyes, he saw love and asked her to marry him. She said yes. What more do we need to know? Great job.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
Congratulations on your well deserved win. In fifteen short, succinct words you described an entire love story. In her eyes, he saw love and asked her to marry him. She said yes. What more do we need to know? Great job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I'm not sure why it's on the prose side of the house, but I did enjoy reading and wish you luck with the entry.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I'm not sure why it's on the prose side of the house, but I did enjoy reading and wish you luck with the entry.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Yusita
This is a sweet and romantic little write and done with exactly 15 words. Nice job. A lovely summary of a beautiful and unforgettable moment. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
This is a sweet and romantic little write and done with exactly 15 words. Nice job. A lovely summary of a beautiful and unforgettable moment. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from jaded831
Romantic, relatable, and a joy to read. I can feel the romance in the air. You have great tone, I feel the emotion. The picture adds to the moment. Together they create an awesome presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
Romantic, relatable, and a joy to read. I can feel the romance in the air. You have great tone, I feel the emotion. The picture adds to the moment. Together they create an awesome presentation.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!