Comment from Jeano

Excellent

Awe, so sad. Your photo really captures the words in a powerful way. You stayed within the 15 word limit and were able to convey the message very well. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

It started as a much longer poem, but I took fourteen words and re-arranged them for the contest.

reply by Jeano on 05-Feb-2024

Well done.

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Thanks for your review and kindness!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the love contest
with fourteen syllables to meet the requirement.
A different theme of lost love from the usual.
Nice addition of the rhyme too.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you! Actually this was part of a much longer poem, but for the contest, I reduced it to fourteen words.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Mourning takes time and everyone's time need is different. Excellent writing. It is full of good emotion and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you! Actually this was part of a much longer poem, but for the contest, I reduced it to fourteen words.