A War
There's more than what we see to it all..2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
I think it's quite a good form that you have written I like your presentation however, the red on the black does not show up too well, but other than that it is beautiful. I wish you the very best and all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I think it's quite a good form that you have written I like your presentation however, the red on the black does not show up too well, but other than that it is beautiful. I wish you the very best and all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Julie Helms
I think you have definitely hit on a nerve here. A lot of people are feeling this way. So tired of being used by those in power to enrich themselves at our expense.
I think this is a typo if I'm understanding the stanza properly:
But the society's on both sides (societies)
Also, something about the red in the first stanza is difficult to read. I did OK, but I suspect you might hear about it from some others.
Thank you for boldly tackling this very important issue. I wish you the very best on it! Julie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I think you have definitely hit on a nerve here. A lot of people are feeling this way. So tired of being used by those in power to enrich themselves at our expense.
I think this is a typo if I'm understanding the stanza properly:
But the society's on both sides (societies)
Also, something about the red in the first stanza is difficult to read. I did OK, but I suspect you might hear about it from some others.
Thank you for boldly tackling this very important issue. I wish you the very best on it! Julie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I caught that mistake after I posted!! I fix it :)
Thank you for your review!! Wish me luck!!
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Of course, best of luck! And keep on writing this awesome stuff!
