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Liquid Limerick

The wages of sin

4 total reviews 
Comment from Jeano
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I've read most of the entries and find this to be the 'silliest' so far. That was the objective so I think, from my standpoint, you might have a winner with this one.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thanks, Jeano.
Comment from Harambe Unchained
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Poor Santa Claus, doomed to hell! I'm a fan of limericks and this may be a short one, but it's still quite successful. If you need an AI picture of a drunk Santa Clause, there are some good ones out there...

Best regards,

Harambe (for President)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thanks, and good luck in the Election!
Comment from lancellot
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A nice entry for the contest and I think you chose the perfect poetic form.

suggestions:

Who drank far too much vintage sherry
-Who drank far too much vintage Sherry

And his nose was an overripe cherry!
-And his nose became an overripe cherry!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
    Cheers! Hic!
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent entry for the silly poem contest
in the form of a limerick with very good rhymes and meter.
No need to split hairs, it's a fun, silly poem
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
    Cheers! Hic!