Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

True, kids do like those cones and adults smile with their ice cream faces (-;

Thanks for your author note about this Haiku-like poem format.

Mark

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you, Mark

gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Not only do kids love dessert but so do adults. I love dessert, although I rarely eat it, this little problem with calories. LOL Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I love sweets. 🙂

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, that is true. That is a helpful tool because that way we can get them to eat at least some part of their healthy dinner before the dessert. Lol. A fun brevette poem!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024

Yes, Atticus always looks forward to dessert lol

Thank you very much, big sister. It's my first brevette... eventhough it's so small it's harder than it seems.

Love

Marival

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I like your brevette form very much. I think this is the shortest poetic I have ever seen, but it is very effective and really gets down to great clarity.

Thank you for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

Gloria,

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I had to go check my birth certificate. I must be a kid because I find it impossible to say no thank you to a dessert. This was a fun and light hearted poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Gretchen.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i love dessert!! who doesn't love dessert?? LOL!
really cute pic of yummy ice cream cones
and now i want some ice cream LOL

fun and cute brevette!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

Shelley,

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs