Ballad Of A Dead Soldier
For in our hearts, you'll forever remain2 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. This is an emotional topic and your words reflect the emotions found in war. Your rhyming and related story image are good too. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. This is an emotional topic and your words reflect the emotions found in war. Your rhyming and related story image are good too. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you Alex. I appreciate.
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Thank you Alex. I appreciate.
Comment from lancellot
This is a good poem and reminder of what can be lost to the horrors of war, even if and when the cause is just.
Good rhymes and tone. I would look again at some of the near-rhymes to see if they could be 100% rhymes.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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This is a good poem and reminder of what can be lost to the horrors of war, even if and when the cause is just.
Good rhymes and tone. I would look again at some of the near-rhymes to see if they could be 100% rhymes.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you again, l appreciate
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Thank you again, l appreciate